Thursday, April 12, 2018

Metaphorical poem V2

A couple of weeks  ago we posted our draft metaphorical poem. After we posted that we started on our better version. Our learning intention was the same but we had to improve on it. My new and improved version is much better in my thought than my last one. It sounds better and it has different and better metaphors.

Ezra Is...

Ezra is some louis vuitton slippers soft and comfy,

Ezra is a ferrari slick and beastly,

Ezra is a pair of gucci shoes expensive and stupendous,

Ezra is a bucket with never ending ideas,

Ezra is a book with immeasurable knowledge.

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